A great story (unrealized running skills, athletic skills) and great character choice (young man in school from poor neighborhood), but author is a poor writer and doesn't yet have the wordsmith skills to get us interested in finding out how this young protagonist makes his way to his own dreams and successes. Strangely enough, a less described character - the mother of the young man - is much more interesting, much better described with only a line or two. The young man seems a bit dull and week, but his mother sounds powerful, funny, and a wonderful person.

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